Tuesday, 21 August 2012

Bula Vinaka!

Ruby recently went on a holiday to Fiji. While she was there she decided to write a postcard to Room 20. She tried to make her writing really exciting and described her holiday. Here is what she wrote.

Can you spot what makes Ruby's writing so exciting?

Bula From Ruby in Fiji

I climbed a coconut tree that was as tall as a giraffe. The swimming pool was as warm as the sun and as large as a humpback whale. Bula Vinaka.

See you soon.

Ruby


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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 August 2012 at 18:52

    Ruby what great work you have done!!
    You have used all of the things that we have learned to use!You have used similes,adjectives and interesting verbs.You have also used a different language.I think you can work on writing your favorite part from your holiday.

    Fabulous work, Ruby!!
    From Hannah



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  2. Anonymous23 August 2012 at 19:04

    Ruby I like your similes

    By Greer

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  3. Anonymous25 August 2012 at 12:45

    Fiji rocks. By Preston

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